AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Silver Wings

by EmeraldFalcon

schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
-Review for chaptr three- So I really liked it. My favorite part was this

Harry leaned back against the half angel's warm chest sighing, "When are you going to tell your mom that we are mates?"

"When, I am no longer scared that she will kill me for the fact that we didn't tell her earlier."


now, my only issue is that whole "I love you" thing Wyatt had at th park with Harry. they had only known each other for two weeks. now, I know they are mates and everything, but that was just too quick to be real. you know? but I do like the story and where it's headed.
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the stoey just wish there was more to it *sighs* poor Briar
*Hands you cookies and mountain dew*
person knj4k4
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i very much enjoyed this story.