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for Fire Tongue

by EmeraldFalcon

person PandaDragon19
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wait.... Did I miss something? Where's the rest of it? The third ball, the reveal, the Dursleys' comeuppance? If that's really all there is, it's very anti-climactic. It's like reading 3/4ths of a book only to find everything but the last page missing. I kinda feel cheated. :/

Oh well. It was a good read. Thanks for writing it.
person knj4k4
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Cinderella Harry Potter stories. I liked that you made it a crossover. and i liked that Jasper was the mate, he's my favorite.