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person Daye
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice though for PWP, it sure had quite a bit of fluff to go with the smut. I think this felt more or less real and its always good to see Draco's canon ship, which is sorely under-represented fic wise. The slighly humourous bent was good as was Draco's first suggestion card.
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I like the way you write Draco and Asteria; it's very realistic. Thanks!