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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're of to a fantabulous start!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
I did notice quite a few typographical errors though, but I liked your story so much it didn't bother me. :D
I Especially love the way you write Severus and Hermione together. Although I did find it abit strange how in the first chapter Hermione was all grim and then after she time travelled to hogwarts she was all...happy seeming and stuff...
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
I did notice quite a few typographical errors though, but I liked your story so much it didn't bother me. :D
I Especially love the way you write Severus and Hermione together. Although I did find it abit strange how in the first chapter Hermione was all grim and then after she time travelled to hogwarts she was all...happy seeming and stuff...