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schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this is a wip..... Hot, sexy, sad and romantic....... Danger will come because you are good at it so keep them coming.......
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wickedly sexy, brilliant. I loved it :D
person circe266
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mercy, that was hot! *fans self*

This is my favorite pair (HG/LM) AND trio, so I was on the edge of my seat to see how you would handle it. I enjoyed it very, very much. I like how your Hermione really 'owns' her desire and pleasure, as opposed to many stories where she is depicted as an innocent, blushing virgin, even in her twenties(!), who needs to be conquered by more powerful and manipulative Slytherins. I also like this randy and opportunistic yet gentlemanly Lucius, and passionate but repressed Severus.

I hope that you are planning to continue this!
person Jen
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Thanks.
person Kim
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Love the creativity. Hopefully this isnt a oneshot. I always love LM/HG/SS fanfictions. Great job.
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well dayum! I love the need and angst in your other story, as you know, but this... all out sex, desire, and pent up frustration, mixed with admiration, like, Snape's issues, and Lucius' need for dominance... Delicious! I look forward to more REALLY soon. Severus should get a chance to redeem himself. ;-) Thank you, HG4eva