rate_review Reviews

Soooo need chapter 4!!! Draco's pov please!!!

Love the story! Not so fond of change of POV's thogh, and especially not when they describe the same thing... even though the other charater can have something to add, it's almost always half-boring to read, I mena, you KNOW a bunch of deathetaers won't burst throught the door, so... no-vote on that... and the charm with this, I think, ist aht we DON'T know what Draco is thinking... has he any real interest? Is he just being a teenage bad-boy, or is this part of a darker plan? Now, I don't think the lat thing, really, but there's always a chance that he really IS the devil, and if we find out what he thinks about, that mystery might go away...

interesting :) harry wants to be bad, eh?

hmm, about possibly writing from Draco's POV, i guess that would let us in on what he's really thinking, and how he feels about the adorably clumsy Harry. there's more mystery and room for surprises if the story's written solely from Harry's POV, but i guess having Draco's too would provide more excitement and direction.

can't wait for the next chapter :D

I love this story. Intriguing beginning. I'd love to see Harry turn into a badass. Dark Harry is really appealing to me right now, because I know how it feels to want to be completely the opposite of what you are.

Hope he picked up his journal! Can't wait for chapter 2!!!

Own persanel Devil. Good so far. Update soon.