rate_review Reviews

why oh WHY did you stop?! this is soo perfectly written! please continue it!

I hope he is still married. It's more interesting that way.

Awesome, second chapter is good, no matter if it was meant as one shot ^^

Will there be more chapters? It doesn't quite seems as a complete story yet *bats eyelashes*

Lovely chapter detailing Hermione's suffering from the loneliness of their relationship's secrecy, and from her worry about her man. It would also be nice to read about what is going on in Lucius' head and in his life. Is he still married to Narcissa? *hopes not*

More, please!

I loved it! I love a tender Lucius.

This is my favorite pairing, and you have done a wonderful job with it. The way you describe their thoughts, emotions, and movements is very real and immediate. Very, very well written.

Although it stands well as a one-shot, I would love to read more about how their newfound love stands up to the pressures of war and the obligations of friends and family.

Good job!