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September 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Dark and twisted.... I Love it!
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October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was very hot! The last paragraph with the next morning was absolutely icing on the cake for driving it home.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow This is Pretty Good Stuff Mate I really liked alot although I think there was some Places where you can improve like the smut scene.I mean you could have prolonged the smut scene the sex scene was pretty small with Harry Pushing Twice in her before coming both the times it could have been written better but overall I will give it 4/5 Points and I hope I will see more Fanfictions from you on this site in the future.
Cheers
Haroon
Cheers
Haroon
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as hot as that is, I don't think Harry should be cruel
he should try to convince Lily to love him
also, it would be hot if she were pregnant
he should try to convince Lily to love him
also, it would be hot if she were pregnant
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good stat and lookinf foward to more likeed the outh too and can see how it would work for latter visits to.
hope you update soon.
hope you update soon.
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is.. i don't know how to say, because on one hand it's hideous and on the other hand it's really good. you certainly know how to write ! ^.^
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. Harry raping his mother and it being their little secret. I liked it.