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for Wands and Wheezes

by auntlynnie

schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay update..great chapter..cant wait to find out when ron realizes he cant get it up! and I cant wait for Fred to get into the love action too whoo..
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

That was a nice chap, but kind of a filler.
I'd love to read how everything wil work out form here!
Keep up the writing,

Alter
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story is AWESOME! This is one of my all time favorite pairings that I never get to see. Your story is lovely and I want to keep seeing more of it! Nothing is better than coming home after a long day of class than to a great story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Writer with a Pearl Earring
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! It's well-written and intriguing. I'm not usually a big pro-Hermione/either twin story, but I really enjoy this one. Can't wait to read more. Very hot scene, btw.
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron and Hermione survived their breakup as friends, but their relationship was far from perfect. That sort of situation inevitably leaves traces of psychological detritus behind. It's not because Ron's a bad guy. He was just young and immature, and perhaps unprepared for a serious relationship. Remember that it has been several years since they broke up, and now they are close friends again. This is *not* a Ron-bashing story. I actually like Ron, even if I don't really ship R/Hr.



thank for that, ron is a good guy, and most of the immature is just becouse he young, and not sure how to deal, thank for not bashing ron, a guy that will die for for you, hold you when you cry, and and spent his last dollor on you a good guy, just in your story they where not right for each and that ok.

schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like ron and hermoine together but if you not going to put them together then i love this line


Slowly, they had all started to heal. It had taken almost a year for them to get over the damage done and get back to being friends, with no hard feelings. Their rebuilt friendship was hard-fought, and they protected it quite jealously


you had them say as friends, so thank you.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this one so far. please update soon :)
person circe266
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I like your characterizations of Hermione and the others.

Since it is categorized as threesome, I assume Fred will get in the act too, eventually?

I can't wait to see George's plan!
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love plans. Will the plans work or fail; and who is to say which is which.