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by GryffindorToy

schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Clapping my hands on a third chapter well done! I love where this is going. Please Please Please update asap :)
I cant wait to read more.
person luna4917
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story!! I can't wait to see what happens when they realise they've been writing to one another all along, even as they've been falling in love.
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww i like it! please continue
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this has a great deal of promise!
person Mila-Renae
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the first two chapters. I love how you've managed to soften our image of Draco, yet make him stronger at the same time. I must say I am EXTREAMLY interested to know what this book contains. Oh and owl love is just too cute. :)
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Haven't read the first version so I have nothing to compare against, but I DO like what I've seen so far.

Interesting twist on Draco's character. Do we get to see why he chose to think outside the pureblood elitist box?
person luna4917
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read the first version, but I'm enjoying the second quite a bit. It will be interesting to watch the relationship grow between the two and how it effects their normal interactions. And how sweet is it that the owls have fallen in love! Off to read chapter 2.
person luna4917
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quite liked the second installment. It was interesting to get a little peek into Draco's life. I'm curious how his 'Father' (I use that word loosely) will be able to control him once he's back at school though? He won't be able to subject him to the same punishments without people noticing. And I'm sure, given the circumstances, that Hermione would forgive his use of 'that' word. Looking foreward to the next chapter.
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic has all the things we like so yes I will follow your updates and review........ But that was a very interesting start with so much mysterious and new characters involved.........
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far and am excited to see where it leads! :-) Please update soon!

- A Mere Reader

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