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by GryffindorToy

person musicandbooks96
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what was the first one called?
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person blacky
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
as always lacking a proper 'review introduction prase' i will just write whatever comes to my mind first.
This fic of yours is great!
I rarely find new H/D fanficton that is so pleasant to read and while somewhat clichee just an idea that allows so many great and fun stuff! I really love your way of writing this!
I absolutely adore your draco and i can understand you had fun writing the second chapter :)
i hope you have as much fun writing all the great chapters following!?
I am SO looking forward to more of these geniously written letters, characteres and of course the moment fern and romeo actually meet. When will they meet, what rules will they have, will they get along nicely after the initial shock or fall back to bad habits?
Please continue writing!

unbecoming impatiently waiting for more
blacky
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love the way your making them like eachother through the letters and not just by them outright liking eachother when they get to school...but I must know is Draco really working for the Order and fooling his father or is it the other way around? Well I guess I will just have to wait and find out. Update soon I cant wait for the next chapt.
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! Such a brilliant idea. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Ohhh the suspense!!! >_<
person TLC
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it! I wish I could give more constructive feedback than that, but seriously, this is just a very fun read. Very much looking forward to more! :0) Well done!
person Bec
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Am liking this story. Even if draco seems a little ooc, i like the fact that you have painted him in a different light to what everyone normally does. I couldn't stop reading this story and when finished, wished there was more. That is the mark of a really good writer. Thankyou for a very good read :)
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Love this story very much!!!! Keep up the great work and update again SOON!!!and
person luna4917
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely Thanksgiving treat!! I just adore reading the interactions between these two. It's a great idea fr them to get to know each other in such a simply way before realising who the other is. It limits the preconceived notions they hold about each other and gives them a chance to see the other for who they really are. And I believe Draco has finally learned that although his parents want him to be one person, his heart isn't truly in it and he is his own man. It's nice to see him find out who he is and find that well of strength inside that he didn't know was there. Well Done!!
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy it. This was a very good chapter and it made me smile. :D I am eagerly awaiting the next one.