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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting yummier and yummier!
Please continue...SOON!
Please continue...SOON!
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL Loved the insight into their thoughts. Poor Draco, neck deep in denial, and Hermione, as practical as I would expect her to be, yet still fighting her own demons. Wonder what Draco will be thinking when he does get his hand up her blouse, or heaven forbid, her skirt. ;) :)
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You definately have me on pins and needles. :D Really liked the fact that you are explaining the characters more and can't wait to see another encounters. I would be great if you didn't skip another year, but whatever you have prepared is probably good. Hope you update soon. :)
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not as exciting as the other chapters. But a story can't be all action, some of it has to be plot:) Some very nice writing though, please post the next chapter soon!
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It has enough to keep you going, but not too over the top for the beginning. Great job. I'm glad you clarified what happened in chapter 1 and it's even better than what I had imagined. Can't wait to see what else happens. :D
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
fun smut! Loved it! :)
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was great! The first encounter was hilarious, Draco's embarrassment was hilarious. When in doubt, take away points :)
I really liked the next encounter, I think the "dry humping" was absolutely a logical progression. It just doesn't feel very realistic to me in Hogwarts-era when they all of a sudden jump right to full-on sex. And, it was totally hot! Loved reading it.
Can't wait for you next chapter!
I really liked the next encounter, I think the "dry humping" was absolutely a logical progression. It just doesn't feel very realistic to me in Hogwarts-era when they all of a sudden jump right to full-on sex. And, it was totally hot! Loved reading it.
Can't wait for you next chapter!
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, caught out in the aftermath of a dry hump and wondering what the hell to do about it. LOL
I'm assuming you're taking this story further by the steady build up? Only a matter of time before they get underneath those pesky uniforms and then Draco really will be wondering what the hell he's doing. LOL
I don't mean for this to sound condescending, for that isn't my intention, but good for you on taking the next step into smutty delight! :)
I'm assuming you're taking this story further by the steady build up? Only a matter of time before they get underneath those pesky uniforms and then Draco really will be wondering what the hell he's doing. LOL
I don't mean for this to sound condescending, for that isn't my intention, but good for you on taking the next step into smutty delight! :)
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was nice. Kind of hard to figure if they had sex though, or if it only was dry hu,ping...
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for "round two" ;)