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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! :]
I always love when you write Draco and Hermione stories, I don't think you write them enought to be honest *cough cough*
Hahah just kidding, but anyway I love this so far! Can't write for things to heat up :D
person mayrz
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your updates every other day..
It's always a "pleasure" reading your stories, it's great!
Keep up the good work!!
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!! Can't wait for more!!!
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy hot shower smutiness! :D But honestly, I loved the whole chapter (are you surprised? I didn't think so.) The fly thing disgusted me, but is that true what Hermione told Draco about Beelzebub? If it is I certainly didn't know that. Can confess to getting a little hot and bothered by Draco's use of daark magic to get them out of the house? LOL

Love it!!

Love and Hugs
Lady B*
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing, I am so glad I took the time to start it. School is getting ready to start, so I was putting off starting anything new for a while, but after several days of trying to resist I just couldn't any longer and I am so glad I gave in. I am always amazed by your gift for attention to detail without weighing down the story. It is the perfect balance of dark, brooding, and malevolent against the sweet, flirty,but still slightly snarky and totally amusing relationship between Draco & Hermione. I think the only way the horror effect could be more perfectly was if I was reading this in the middle of the night during a thunder storm; however, it is all sunny skies this afternoon and I was still left with a lingering creepy feeling. Excellent job! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You began with me bing disturbed and then you ended with a bang, literally! You really have a wounderful imagination for horror. I loved the addition of the flies. Being raised a catholic it really resonated with me and things I was told growing up. I still think the dools hold the souls of the children. It does make me wonder about Polly and why she still haunts the grounds of her demise. Can't believe you had them in the sack so quickly but it was called for after what they had been through. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. Normally it is the angst and my curiosity to see where the relationship of the main characters are going that drives me to continue reading a story. However for this story I desperately want to see how they "clean" this house from this evil. I also love how you hint on how the souls can be saved by damaging the dolls however if they have to go through that every time they free a doll they wont survive. You make this story real enough that i wouldn't read it in it's entirety alone at night. Not to mention that was probably one of the most intense lemons that I have ever read. Thanks.
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a climax!!!!! :)
person Smurphy
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was a scary chap..... All those dolls... I bet they have to release the souls that are trap in each one of them... Brrr I am shivering right along with Draco and hermione how scary is that..... I wonder what will happen next??? How long will it take for him to lose all of the energy that he can draw from.... Ohhh and that book I wonder what's in that book!!!! Great chap SG
person ThePrincessH
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow,
It just gets better and better!
Worth getting yelled at, at work for reading!
ThePrincessH
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