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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

person Smurphy
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was a very sexy chap... Dracos already lost to hermione but his was chasing his tail for her when they first entered the house.... I wonder how that's gonna change the dynamic with the spirits... And good eye hermione in realizing that the dolls are a huge part in this that should be an interesting chap when they release the spirits... I do wonder what they will find in the cellar obviously him... I love how take charge hermione is and how she knows what she wants and goes for it!!! Loved the chap and I cannot wait for the next!!!
person Jennifer
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gosh Darn it, you really know how to get the juices flowing. Moremoremorepleasepleaseplease.
person akire
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved this fic! its not the usual headboy/girl etc and focuses on both characters! and loved that hermione here isn't a prude or a proud virgin. will be looking forward in your next update! good work!!! :))
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um, okay, wow, sorry I am just about to grab the hubs and have a shag fest of my own, after the last two chapters. Don't have the words for the hotness of these chapters. I'll be more coherent, I hope, for the next chapter! Love YOU!!
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
IT's about freakin time u updated ( i find myself loggin on several times a day now to check for updates) and my, what a GLORIOUS addition u gave! i'm very happy. So what's it going to be, are u going to let them go check out where he killed himself first then break the dolls, or the other way around. i figure if they do the dolls first, then he'll come back angry like last time, but if they do the cellar first, he may not rear his ugly little head just yet. And when's hermione goin to read the journal that she picked up... i'm dying to know what's inside!hnmmmmm..... so many questions and so many possible twists... i just love to play them out in my head.... of course... this is all ur world... but i like to write the rest of the story in my head and then see how close my version matches up to urs... that's all.... update soon!!!! i'm waiting!
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Way to go, Hermione! Take what you want, how you want and don't apologize. I enjoyed that almost as much as he did. LMAO Sexy, delicious, and yummy. Thank you! I liked his idea of putting off going back in that house by having a shagfest. :-) You said to enjoy and I did. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
person AngelBaby
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH 6: Can I look after Draco's bits? I was never into blonds until I started reading your fics and now i'm quite addicted but they're Malfoy's aren't they, who wouldn't be? The dolls scarred the crap out of me. Always had nightmares about my dolls coming alive, ahhh......
CH 7: Holy shit indeed. Your forgiven for the wait on the update. Your man's back, we can wait.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way he "saved the day!" lol I have to say you wouldn't be able to get me in that house with a gun to my temple! And, how do neither one of them realize what the dolls are? lol The most obvious answer is usually the right one, guys! ha ha ha I look forward to seeing their reactions upon waking. ;-) Thanks! HG4eva
person Smurphy
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what a perfect sexy and steamy moment!!!!! You wrote their passion for each other perfectly!!!
person Aundree'a
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when we'd get to a naked draco and hermione, and let me tell you it was not a moment too soon! I was in need of a good lemon! Lol.
I do have to say, this story gives me the chills. To know what kind of evil they're dealing with... I get goosebumps! Normally I'd be extremely apprehensive about reading something like this, but I am extremely interested!

Can't wait for the next update!

~Aundree'a