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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Very nice! I like how you are showing their growth and bond while still dealing with such horrid things. It's amazing at how people can change when they have a common goal in something. Great draw on Wicca and Demonology. I can't wait to see how much more you tie them in.


Can't wait for the next chapter!


Lady Serin
person wishyouwere
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you are back, and aside from the dark tone of this tale, really enjoying the story. This has become my favourite couple in the fandom. If I say pretty please, is there any chance of another chapter this weekend? Pretty please???
person mary potter
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey, do you know the Malfoy Manor?
http://malfoymanor.grangerenchanted.com/themanor/
it is a great place for posting fics like this.
person apkblack
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely delicious. One of the sexiest no-frills sex scenes I've ever read.
You are truly skilled that way. LOL

Looking forward to the updates, seeing what happens in the house ...
person Mila-Renae
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I tried to look you up on ff.net. I couldn't find you. If you're on there my screen name is Mila-Renae. lol. Anyway, great chapter! I always saw a bit of a dominate in Hermione. lol.
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear Gods! Those two are insatiable! They are going to breed like bunnies lol! I can't wait to see how our baddie warps and twists their growing affections!

Can't wait for a new chappie!!!


Lady Serin
person ancheto
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You write the BEST sex scenes EVER! lol
this story is great, keep up the great work =)
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very pleasurable interlude for the hero and heroine! Very hot and ummm....yeah, you get the picture...LOL

Can't wait to see how they resolve releasing the souls of all the children. Those dolls have me creeped out......

Love it!!

Love and Hugs,
Lady B*
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Thank you for the update!
Last weekend, I summarized your story for my sister and future brother-in-law. Both of them didn't understand how I could continue reading, they said it was way too creepy. And I do have to admit, that walking my dog through the forest at nighttime didn't feel quite as good after reading your story... ;)
However, I think Hermione's got it wrong when it comes to the dolls, doesn't she? My brother-in-law asked whether the dolls were really Horcruxes, and after reconsidering - especially the heartbeat of the dolls - I think he's right. (Don't spoil it if he is, don't spoil it if he isn't, please!) After all, Slytherin's locket also had what JKR described as a tiny heartbeat... plus, if Maxwell's evil is comparable to Voldemort's evil, that would be because he'd made himself "immortal" in the same way, wouldn't it?

Please, please update soon. I have to admit, as much as I love lemons and good hot action, I was actually a little disappointed that you didn't have them go back into the house to face more of its mysteries... :(

The way you portray Hermione is very refreshing, in my opinion - she's not the frigid little bashful girl so many other fictions have her be. Truthfully, while I read this latest sex scene, I wished I could be as fantastic a lover as her... haven't been with a man in over four years, so I don't know if I could ;)

I'm waiting for your next update! You said the story is already finished...? *puppy dog eyes*
person KellyJCR
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That made my computer screen fog up! Love their ease with each other. Well done!!!!