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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
Teasing Draco with lustful thoughts of his father was the perfect touch. :)
Teasing Draco with lustful thoughts of his father was the perfect touch. :)
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am completely enthralled in this story! I cannot wait for an update. It's so well written that I can actually feel their dread, and the fear. The sinister spirit in the house can certainly be felt through the words. Great Work!
Anxiously Awaiting Update!
:) B.
Anxiously Awaiting Update!
:) B.
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how the two interact in this story. I'm also wondering how the children can be saved.
This sort of reminds me a bit of The Haunting with Liam Neeson etc... amazingly beautiful house, trapped children. Evil antagonist.
This sort of reminds me a bit of The Haunting with Liam Neeson etc... amazingly beautiful house, trapped children. Evil antagonist.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My goodness. It keeps getting better and better, but also more creepy. I can only imagine having to deal with someone as crazy as Doll!! As always, you have me floored, and I get excited everytime I see an update! Can't wait for the next update!!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH 8: Lovely, yummy, delicious Draco. Hermione is very naughty, heehee.
Ch 9: Ahh too scary and yucky for me. Your going to have to write me one of your funny Severus stories after having to read this. I'm determined to get through this and give you feedback though. Am listening to Uncle Kracker's "Smile" while I read so i'm not so scarred. LOL.
Ch 9: Ahh too scary and yucky for me. Your going to have to write me one of your funny Severus stories after having to read this. I'm determined to get through this and give you feedback though. Am listening to Uncle Kracker's "Smile" while I read so i'm not so scarred. LOL.
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope they succeed, too! This chapter was chocked full of information I never needed to know. lol I'm with Draco on all this. Burn it down and start over! But, I do get Hermione's point about freeing the children, even if I don't want to get it. ;-) I love the way you throw the romance and desire in there at the same time. That, my dear, is quite a skill! Thanks and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow so we got some more detail into doll's madness... He was really sick but very smart... Like knowng that if the aurors got there first they would know what to do with him.... I knew the cellar was going to be interesting... Wow do we know why he killed hisself???? Great chap SG and very creepy:-))
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You were not kidding with that warning. The character you created is a sick and twisted soul. You really have combined the Black magic, Wicca and magical elements perfectly. Plus you have explained the way they inter-relate very well. I love the response Hermione gave to Draco about why he should enter first. (I wish I had the cajones to say stuff like that.) There was some foreshadowing in there if I'm correct, "e be stronger than he fink e is" hit me as particularly poignant. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I love that it isn
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. And I'm so glad you made the distinction between Wicca and black magic. Most people paint them both in the same evil light. I like the whole concept of the story. It's really enjoyable and dark. I can't wait to see what's next!
P.S.: Are we going to see more of the ghosts of the children or Claira? I enjoy the interaction with them.
P.S.: Are we going to see more of the ghosts of the children or Claira? I enjoy the interaction with them.