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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie! I love seeing love blossom. I can't wait to see how you traumatize them next! *evil laugh*

Lady Serin
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh the edge of my seat.....on the edge I tell you
person Mila-Renae
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally taken from the movie The Craft, but I'll let it slide! haha. I loved the bit in the begining about H telling Lucius about all the things Draco's done to her. I hope she DOES IT! That would be EPIC, AMAZING! It would seriously MAKE this story. lol

xoxox

Mila
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well damn. it was just getting really good. i got all excited and my blood was pumpin. i think i actually got an adrenaline rush from reading that. you really are a great writer. i cannot wait for the next update. please do so as soon as you can. Thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination!
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie! I love the decimation of the baddie! I can't wait to see how Hermione gets out of this one! I'm glad the girls were all set free.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lady Serin
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was impressed with the spell/ritual too. :)
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I read 9-11 and I really liked the enteraction between Draco and Hermoine.

I know that you will not leave us hangin for long ;) !!!!

I hope Draco keeps the property and builds a real house with a loving wife (hint, hint...Hermoine) and a whole passel of kids!
person KellyJCR
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SO a little trip into the thoughts of Draco. Interesting how the house is so similiar to the Malfoys. The bantering is working as a wonderful aphrodisiac. Sex on the stairs was very creative and are we going to find out who the other muggleborn was? I'm sure its not important to the story. I just like to see where authors take their characters outside the plots. I feel awful for Polly . It seems to me she may be the saddest spirit in the house. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
person Gertie
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think sex like that would be worth a few scraped up knees and maybe a lump on the head. Fantastic so far. I am so excited to see how they free the girls and whether or not Draco just burns the damned house to the ground and starts fresh. Keep posting my dear girl, and I will continue to sing your praises.
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was sweet and tender and lovely. Even the end, with the two ghosts watching, was eerie, but sweet. Well done! Thank you! I look forward to more soon. Off on my trip, so I will write when I get back. :-) TTFN, HG4eva