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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

person Elphaba
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
epilogue, epilogue! Great chapter! Loved it!!!
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the Epilogue! Great work!
person Sofia
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Interesting plot - Had elements I've never seen used, in such a well-written way, in other stories.
Well done. :)
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. And I hope that the team of Granger and Malfoy will arise again. Maybe even the patter of little feet in their future?!?!?!
person Amanda
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was absolutely amazing. I wish there was more! I loved the voices of Hermoine and Draco. I think you really nailed them. Awesome!
person Mila-Renae
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please, please let them stay together and have little Malfoys! Pretty please with beautiful Slytherin blondes on top! ^_^
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story



it keep me in suspense the whole time! please continue



do you beta? i really need one...so if you do let me know plz
person Smurphy
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh see Draco your not a coward!!!! Now go be a hero and save hermione... This chap was wonderfully done and very creepy!!! I am soooo excited about the next chap... :-)))
person Narcissas sister
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left it there! I love the bond between Draco and Hermione. It spoke volumes that he trusted and respected her enough to do what she told him to. I was surprised that Draco wants to sell the property. I would expect any Malfoy to just tear down the original buildings and start anew. Draco seems to understand that no matter what happens on this property the memory of long ago will always linger. Sad to see that its coming to an end. Can't wait for the final chapters I have loved this story since chapter one. Well done!!!
person Smurphy
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh they are falling in love!!!! How sweet!!!! Loved the romp on the stairs and I love human you have written Draco!!! It was soooo funny when hermione was talking about luci that was sooo funny!!!! Great chap

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