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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful to see your creativity here again, and to indulge in what is always an amazing creation. :)

I was reading your reviews too, and must say, how pleased I am to hear of your newfound happiness, which you so rightly deserve. :)
person alecto
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh YIPPEEEE!!! i was jonesing for a Lumione but I will certainly settle for a Dramione. You're right - this is so much darker than how you usually write already and I am very, very curious to see how this turns out. Cannot wait for the next posting!
person Narcissas sister
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am so thrilled to see you posted. After a year of teasing we finally get a chance to read The Doll House. This is the type of story I would read on my own away from the fanfiction that I indulge in. Your Draco is witty and funny and is lovable in a way only you can create. Hermione is still her overachieving self but has found a comfortable place to live between the "communiies" of which see is a part of. It reminds me a bit of the Liam Neesen film The Haunting. I am a sucker for a good horror movie and to have two of my favorite things wrapped in one is a big treat. Glad to see things are looking up for you and can't wait for more. Well done!!!
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOUR BACK!!!! YEAAAAAAAAA!!! I can't tell how you how much you have been missed! So wonderful to hear that you are once again happy and in love. I am anticipating a great story with the Doll House, and any other oneshots you want to throw our way! (Hint Hint) sorry, now that you are back among us, I of course, need more and more!! Damn addictive personality !! (Bangs head on counter, in need of another hit, please!) It is wonderful to see your name back among the boards, though, I seem to remember that you have always put up the first 5 chapters of your new stories, not three. I know, being pushy once agin. I will gladly take my spanking now, for being such an inpatient PIA !
person paigeey07
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love itt!!
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I've waited forever and here it is! I love it! I love the easy banter between Draco and Hermione already! Already the details surrounding Doll House have me spooked and you know I hate scary movies!!! Looking forward to the rest!

Brilliant writing as usual!

Love and Hugs
Lady B*
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Interesting...Draco not afraid of ghosts. That and him wanting to get far from his parents and yet still make his mom happy. I like it so far.

Chapter 2: Lol, gods, you could cut the unconscious sexual tension with a knife! I love how frustrating the find each other and yet still can't hate one another. Made my sides hurt I laughed so hard.

Chapter 3: Excellent creation of a psycho and his story. Incredible!!! Not to mention the details! I can't wait to see this unfold! I also liked how you have Draco capable of standing up for himself and showing how he has grown.

Great beginning, I can't wait for the next chapters and to see this story unfold!

Write again soon,

Lady Serin

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