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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

person Smurphy
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyy the next chap is awesome!!! And it looks like it's about to get reallly good!!!! I wonder what's gonna happen when doll wakes???? I bet it will be scary!!!!! I love Draco and hermiones banter and I laughed so hard when Polly flashed Draco that was hysterical and hermione is such a tease poor Draco he doesn't have a chance.... I have a feeling the cellar will he an interesting spot
for them!!!!
person AngelBaby
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god oh my god oh my god you've posted another story. Wahooooo!
Off to read then I will review properly.
person Willi1pf
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. It is so interesting!! I love ghost storys and I love Dramione so put the two together and I am in heaven. :) Can't wait for the next update!
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... I was expecting Ibsen, but I got Poe instead. ;)

Go on, go on... I'm all ears (or eyes, rather). *brings out the wine and settles down to wait*
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:
Oh yeah, I hate side-along apparition too, Can i please cling to Draco? Draco in a blue sweater, white t, and relaxed fit denims! YUMMY!! Best Line:
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh the poor souls...they want to protect Draco and Hermione....and I love the interaction you're building between the two of them.
person KellyJCR
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've outdone yourself my dear. This is fantastic. I Think Polly is so on point for the era she was from. Claira seems to be protective of the living. Which is odd that she is more mature than Polly who was quite a bit older and more seasoned due to her profession. I love the play between Draco and Hermione. If they were ever to be so cordial and friendly with each other this is exactly the way it would play out. I'm fairly certain that this Doll fellow is going to toy with Draco and his issues he may have with his childhood. I just have to be patient and wait for the action to begin. Damn I can't think of an appropriate word to describe how happy I am that you are back and that things are going so well for you. Well done!!!!
person jeejee
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're back!! YAY!!!!! fantastic beginning!
Missed your fics so glad you're back!
person october
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS! :D
person Mila-Renae
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Cheeky Hermione is the best! And The way you described Draco in those jeans and blue jumper. So bloody hot!