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for The Doll House

by soldiersgirl0709

person smurphy
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA omg i just love their banter.... they are sooo funny... i love this draco it is one of my absolute favorite ways for him to be portrayed...

poor draco polly has a serious crush on him.... lol

wow they both had the same dream.. hmmm why do i get the feeling that there is more to it then tapping into each others subconscious??? i bet it has something to with the house or maybe polly is trying to help them out... lol

seriously though the sexual tension is thick... OMG i laughed so freaking hard at the part where hermione said... 'and its dancing'.... lmao oh wow that was hysterical...

schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You have me hanging on the edge of my seat.
person Jennifer
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Goddess, you know how to spin a great yarn, and get the juices flowin'. Need more, please???????
person Aundree`a
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!! I screamed and did a little dance when I saw that you had posted! Welcome back! I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say that I extremely excited to read this story! Already, I'm highly intrigued!
Can't wait for the next update!

~Aundree`a
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! The sexual tension hikes up a notch or 12 lol. I'm really impressed with how you said you drew on your own fears to create your bad guy. That's a great idea and I hope it unfolds even better then you hoped it would.


Lady Serin
person Cristeen
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! I get excited everytime you update. I love the plot thus far and I'm looking foward to what is happening next.
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, waking up with Draco!! I wish!! And poor Draco, being "hunted" by Polly! LOL Mmm, if Hermione doesn't want to dream about Draco and snuggle back against him, I will happily take her place!! :)

Brilliant little hint of smut!

Love and Hugs,
Lady B*
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better and better.

I love the sexual tension/attraction play between Draco and Hermione. Even the horny ghost is wonderful.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person KellyJCR
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love that sexual tension! Can't wait to see whats in that book. Your Hermione is made of steel. I,m afraid I would have taken Draco up on that ride. Well done!!
person Mila-Renae
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! Great slow building of sexual tension. And what I wouldn't give to wake up to an aroused Draco... sigh. Yum!

xoxo

Mila

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