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Quality satire, right there. Good job, Sir and or Ma'am. Good Job.

Brilliant!!! I love it! I've just been thinking that we need more postmodernist approaches to the stories, something to point to the fact that it's all fiction. What you've done reminds me a bit of The French Lieutenant's Woman. If I ever do get around to writing a fic, I'll definitely do a piece like that, too.

Can't wait to see where your witty mind takes us next!

BTW, I love how you're parodying the conventions of the majority of fics out there. Hermione ALWAYS comes hard, in fact she always comes simultaneously with her partner or at least they both always come (now how often does that really happen?). She ALWAYS takes of her clothes, revealing her undies, her breasts ALWAYS spill over her bra/top, she ALWAYS feels sensuous when taking a shower. LOL your fic really is a hoot to read. Will you maybe pick it up again? Pretty please?? ;)

HAHAHAHAHA
that was the funniest piece of erotica ive ever read :P

This is seriously strange, but I can't say I dislike it - despite your prediction. I am curious though, is there an actual point to this or just some random thoughts on the page....Also is she really alone on the roof? I'll be interested to see what's next.

I dont hate it because its not sexual, I hate it because its crap...