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by Pheobi

schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yippieh, loved all the updates!!! Great story!
person leanne
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
despite the sort of silly nature of this story I find myself enjoying it immensley and hope to see more chapters up soon.

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Leanne
person AK
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Snape Place
person starwest45
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I really hope Harry and Severus get themselves sorted. I don't like the idea of a double wedding. Every "bride" deserves their own day. Plus the way things stand now Harry's wedding will have a very different feel from Ginny's. As for the Snape home the name "Grey Haven" popped into my head. In the Lord of the Rings the Elves go off to the grey havens, I can see Severus as a Tolkin fan, or just an accidental similarity, but that's name that pooped into my head when I read the question.
person arya
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling pretty sad for sev. I mean harry's not getting any punishment at all! considering the fact that he basically tricked snape to get pregnant, which is a kind of rape. And he gets to make all the decisions about the baby?! ie. the name. He was going to keep the baby away from sev for god's sake, deny him his parantal rights. And instead of sev getting something out of this, or harry suffering a little, we have harry making it seem like marrying sev is a big chore! When in fact, if they marry the baby won't be called a bastard! truthfully i just been like justice hasn't been handed out for thing that harry did. sev deserves better. At least make harry jealous or something by seeing someone hitting on sev or something!
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Double sounds good but tell me this isn't done the summary I think said it was complete I want more please
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the whole thing with Ginny and Draco it was so cute. I feel bad for Herry couse Severus is so slow some times. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
person Jennifer
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely going for something to the effect of Prince Estate. Sev is his mother's only child, and I believe cannon has her as being an only child. Even if Tobias Snape was a bastard, he would not have been able to do anything to his wife's family estate. He might have drunk away the money she brought to the marriage, but the estate couldn't be touched, as it would have been held for the first male heir. I would go with that.....
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still can't memeber of sir alive iall have to check if so that would be cooll can't wait for more the baby is safe yeah
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. Wingnut19741@gmail.com for updates pleae