rate_review Reviews

this is a really interesting story! it gives a rather good look at bondage i think :)

Well, I'd say it's a good start and I'll be most interested in Harry's reaction to seeing her like this when he returns home. I'm curious, does the bondage of Harry include and cock and ball bondage? Does their play go farther than just bondage? There's lots of potential here, especially with Tonks joining in. If Luna & Ginny ever join them, it could become quite a bondage orgy.

I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Your opening was beautiful. I'm a big fan of rainy days, too, and your words were a perfect descriptor of the feelings summoned up on such a day.

I like that you have Harry and Hermione in such an intense Bondage relationship yet it is written as a completely normal and accepted part of their lives. Tonks being their domme makes for a nice authoritative figure who is still fun and playful, something the two of them could use.

Very well written and unique.

That was excellent! Your attention to detail and the flow to your writing really brings the eroticism to life. I loved the opening image of Hermione resting against the window: really beautiful start. The sense of anticipation that you build up and tease the reader with is fantastically well done. Overall, a very well-written piece.

Please keep writing!