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for Ragnarok

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very beautifully done :D, it's really well written & i cannot wait for more to come
person W
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... The way you described Dracos magic had me shivering. You really made me feel it with your words. And Harry's little show was so extreme that I can't help thinking: What would happen if he could use that kind of power for other things than destruction?

I don't think that Harry is going to die because of his magic, mostly because it would make this whole story pointless. And Draco needs someone to balance him, his magic and his desire for power. But I also hope that Harry doesn't lose his magic. Harry without his magic, without being powerfull one way or another just doesn't feel rigth...
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now the intrigue really begins!
person SP777
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Is it safe to say that what they experienced was almost better than an actually orgasm. :-)

I have to admit I'm intrigued, though I am curious to know 'what's the catch' in this
story.

By the way, let Thrnbrooke know a reader was curious to know where did they disappear to?
person anonanon
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic! I could see the scene between them on the field of powerful magics rolling over adn into each other so clearly, it's still a vivid picture imprinted on my mind. Simply spectaculur! Please update this marvelous story when you have the chance.
person polka dot
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Draco. gotta want the power. power rocks!
person angelmuziq
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loooved this chapter! I hope Harry helps Draco increase his power and Draco helps Harry control his and then together the can change the world... hopefully for the better. And man it would definately be hot to see them 'together' with all that power. hehehe. Im surprised but glad to see that Harry seems to believe Draco so easily. Next chapter pleeeease. I'm dying to know whats going to happen next and if theres going to be any setbacks, though I'm sure there will be. And if there will be an evil to fight. Great Work!!!
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Blow me away, why don't you!? Soooo need chapter 4!!!
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 please!!!
person TCardan
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Anything great chapter. I like Draco's motives and his round a bout way of attaining them. He's like Lucius in that manner.