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for Ragnarok

by Lomonaaeren

person angelmuziq
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man that was an awesome chapter! I think steam was wafting off the screen. LOL. Im surprised but pleased that Harry and Draco progressed this fast in the physical aspect of things. I also like this Harry that likes to order people/things around and how powerful Draco and Harry are. Loved this chapter and totally in love with this fic. I cant wait to see how they progress and what they will do to rule the Wizarding World. Again great work. Keep bringing the hotness.. woohoo!!
person Regina
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In my mental AU of this story, Harry went to Hermione, who of course keeps up with Muggle news, and directed him toward a job leveling landfills. That way, he could use his power, not just making it less dangerous to him and others, but also in a way that alleviates his guilt because he's actually helping people and the environment while he's at it- after all, instantaneous destruction means little to no release of harmful chemicals and compounds into the atmosphere, right? He takes side jobs finishing off dangerous construction sites as well.

Ehehe. Sorry, but that idea was distracting me so much I had to mention it. In any case, I don't think this particular Harry is so concerned with saving the world anymore. One of your darker pieces, isn't it?
person W
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I so liked the picture you painted when their magic touched and connected. It just felt... magical^^

Normally I'm wary about stories where Harry is near-to-all-powerfull, because it always holds the implication that one must fear he turns dark. And I think a really dark!Harry is so uncanon... I just don't think it feels right^^ And although Draco is similar in strenght to him, I can't shake this feeling, especially after this last chapter...

Come what may, I'm still very curious about this story! It's brilliant, can't wait for more!!!

*goes to bed and wishes she had magic*
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice lol. As the chapters go on I just keep getting happier and happier and wanting to know more. Harry and Draco are strong and intense and the way their power reacted when they were together was definitly interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job!!!! =)
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! I hated the way she'd end her letters. Like trying to guilt him into coming back. To feeling sorry for her!
person SP777
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #6..

Yep, that's one way of bringing 2 people together. :-)

By the way, mail call.
person anonanon
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*0* <--- This is what my face looks like after reading this AMAZING chapter. Thank you once more for updating your wonderful story! As always, absolutely FANTASTIC imagery! Keep it up when you can please.
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Tryed to read it before when I was half way sleep and it didn't go to well. I'm glad I came back to read it. It's really interesting and I can't wait to read what happens next.
person polka dot
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was cool. Destructive sex.
person qwerty
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was such an amazing scene with Harry and Draco at the end. Wow.