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for Ragnarok

by Lomonaaeren

person anonanon
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work as always, your writing never fails to amaze me. Thank you for updating once more, please dos so again when you have the chance.
person SP777
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"I'm American"..heh! You know, I feel like I walked
right into that one and got slapped in the face..with
a pie. :-)
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about #11...

Well, not much to say on this one, felt more like
a filler. But I am curious to see if these plans
of Draco blow up in his face, because someone with
THAT much ambition usually winds up overly confident
and power hungry.

Why does Draco want such control anyway, what's the
REAL reason?
person polka dot
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see the boys take over the world...
They're Harry and Drake, yes Harry and Drake
and is a recluse and the other's insane..
Oh yes I need to stop cause I'll have this in my head all night now
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. New favorite story. I love the rawness of their interactions...it's pretty much how I always thought HD should be.
person anonanon
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, simply delicious.
person purple-er
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!
I know by now that reviews aren't necessary to keep you going, but it's pure habit to leave a token of appreciation as always.
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was intersting. I like the detail you put into the fight and how Harry got to Gilfleur. Now I can't wait to see where Draco decides to go next. Great job!! =)
person SParker
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

1. I was trying to think of the words that describes
Harry & Draco's 'relationship'...and mad &
[knowing you] borderline obsessive comes to mind.

Makes me wonder how it will end.

2. You know I noticed that ur chapter titles seem to
reflect...noise in a way.

3. Out of curiousity, what is your nationality?
person polka dot
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my they're going the natural born killers route. scary
person SParker
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #9..

You know, as I read this, I couldn't help but remember
them as the 12 year olds they used to be as their only
worry was beating each other in Quidditch.

I wonder what their younger selves would think now?

Just thinking out loud..

A question...are you the type of author who needs
to read that they are doing a good job on a chapter
in a review? If so, I'll make sure to do so often...