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wow, a lot packed into that chappie.
still, heathrow? you're naming him after a hedge? ah well, no accounting for taste. still if my father had his way, and my twin younger sisters had been born boys, they would have been heath and laeth... thank glory they were born girls. ma has far better taste in names. (talitha and bonita) kids still going to catch hell at school... though with the weird wizarding names out there, maybe not.

wow, those horcruxes were fecking evil, damaging pieces of junk huh.
so where does this leave har, legal wise in regards to his wife? can he divorce her in absenteeism or something? eh, he and draco are a far better match anyway. gah, draco's ex sounds like a total shrew.
so, nearly done, done and onto the next one?

Nigel?! In what alternate universe is Nigel a good name?! It comes under the heading of what the baby name books call 'a character building name' i.e. expect your kid to get ragged on, bullied and beaten up at school because of it. Pls, let Stan keep his name and don't change it to something so namby-pamby and nancy boy sounding. I'm surprised Percy wasn't absolutely persecuted with that name. Then, maybe the english are more tolerant towards such names than the yanks and the aussies.

I'm glad Al's okay with har and draco's sort of developing relationship. I don't know what will happen if the effects on Gin are reversed but considering her paranoia, I'd say they'll definitely split. I persnoally think it might not be such a bad thing if they didn't get fixed. sure the babies would have to go through everything again, but personally, i can think of worse fates. I know the fountain is sealed and stuff now, but if i was given the choice of be rendered back to a baby or the Kiss, I'd go with baby myself. The only prob is you'd have to find unbiased ppl to raise the kid.

I hope scorpi and Har's other kids will be equally understanding.

For shopping with a teen girl, that was rather mild.

Shouldn't try to tease your father! Too funny!!!

I'm sooo liking this!!! Is there hope for Ginny or will she have to grow up again?

WB, been a while, neh?
heh, oh my did young Al get an eyefull? Well, that's what he gets for peeking. :P
Well, that's that troublesome well hopefully dealt with. It will be interesting to see if the enchantment can be reversed. If not, i guess Stan and Gin get a second chance at life... quite literally.
Will any of your other stories be updating? I remember there were some really good ones.

Well, I like what I've read so far.
I mean, there is not much of a plot yet, as it is only the beginning of the story, but I'm pretty sure that will change soon enough.
Only one thing though - not all that important, but I'm strange like that. You wrote "the GEIS as the knight bus conductor". It took me nearly half a minute to get that you probably meant "the GUIS of the knight bus conductor".
I know it's silly to point out but still...xD.....
Other than that, nice work!

i'm glad Har isn't being daft enough to refuse Malfoy out of left over guilt. I'm also glad he has a plan regarding the fountain. Thats NOT something you want to leave laying around.

... well, it was certainly passionate.
can't wait to see if the water can be cured... and i agree with Harry. Malfoy elder needs to get over it, stop stressing and move one. Malfoy younger has, and how.

Now THIS was a fun idea. Pity it ain't finished yet. :P

I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I SERIOUSLY HATED THAT ROWLING'S GAVE DRACO A RECEDING HAIR LINE!!!!!! I MEAN REALLY????? DRACO WAS THE SAME AGE AS LUCIUS AND HE HAD A FULL HEAD OF HAIR!!!!!!! BITCH!!!!!! (Not you Rowlings). Anyway I was glad to see you brought Lucius and Narcissa back to full health. It was depressing to see them like that. Not to happy about Hermione acting like she's the only smart one around. I really don't like her!!!! Anywho and yes I said anywho I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!! THIS IS SOOO EXCITING!!!!!!!!