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for Tommy, Son of a Dark Lord

by SomethingElse

schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1

I can't lie, that scene squicked me a bit. Probably because I've had kids and know what is entailed. Will Draco remember it? I am a little concerned because you said at first that you weren't going to post it. I hope you continue to post. Even though it squicked be a bit, and I'm sure there's much more ickyness to come, I still liked it. Maybe because it squicked me, IDK. ;)
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, good on you, Draco. Kick him some more. The bladder makes a great soccer ball, and the ribs are fun to play with your toes. Just ask my kids, lol.

Poor Draco, lost all his hair! I guess he'll be dark haired now? or stay bald like old Voldie? *shudders* I guess we'll have to see....
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ch 3

Ok, that was gross, lol. OW.....Oliver Wood! lol....Yeah, I just got that. You don't see his initials all that often. It gets worse? Oh, damn. Well, we'll see. You'll know if you lost me, cause its the only reason I'll stop reviewing.....

Although, tbh, I lose stories on this site all the time as there isn't an update notification that I can find.....
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't help thinking, wouldn't he die, drinking only piss? And so that's the hp/dm twist...hm...Now I'm really worried about the real Draco. I should probably be worried about Oliver, too, lol...
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ch 4

I'm a little confused about Draco. Is he baby size or full grown looking like a baby?
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what in the world made him decide that Draco was good son material?

I do feel sorr for Oli though, it sucks hairy goat balls to be him. I assume there is something that makes him unable to ask harry for help?... besides his obvious Malfoy coating. >>
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man, he's sure making his way joyously through the hogwarts captives, isn't he.
How long do you figure it'll take Draco/tommy to work out to cry for attention?
poor draco, trapped in a helpless body. I hope he doesn't go nuts before he has a chance to do anything.
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Squicky and demented, indeed! But nevertheless, I had to read it. And somehow I liked it. Please continue.^^
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more! I like where this is going...
person Azrael
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Baby Draco who isn't a baby. How much cooler can you get?