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for Far from my Dreams

by ShilohDarke

person Persy
schedule November 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Still ss beautiful as ever.

person Persy
schedule August 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

A most beautiful love story!

person Persy
schedule June 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

What a beautiful love story.....

person realpoli
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM

I almost cried, thinking of the two star-crossed souls trying to reach each other. I can't shake the feeling that this solution is unhealthy, wrong even. She is so young to make such a decision because surely there are other people with whom she could partner. It seems rather sick to be attached to a jealous lover who cannot socialize with anyone else. How difficult it would be to remain sound of mind in such a situation. How tempting to become a recluse it would be...
person Tenar10r
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful :) I'd like to see this story continued.
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see this as a multi chapter story. Very good.
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed your story, so different!!
person circe266
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's not my favorite pairing, but I very much enjoyed this lovely, dreamy story. Well written, and an interesting concept.

I would enjoy this as a multi-chap, or at least a two-shot, with the second chapter as an overview of her life with him inside the house, and her time outside without him. Her work, friends' reactions, etc.

Thank you for writing such a sweet story.
person use2b2t2
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a story. The tone was well set and I throughly enjoyed the view of a Ghost Snape. It would turn it a great multi-chapter story as well

Mare