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for MIT: Magic Incorporating Technology

by Fel

schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice end to Jerry
person karisusa
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. I just wanted to tell you that towards the middle-end of the story, when jerry is attempting to rape harry, you have ash's name instead of jerry's name in one of the sentences. I just wanted to tel you because i got confused for a second, thought jerry somehow made harry think he was ash or something like that and i don't want anyone else to get confused like i did. Besides hte one mistake t was a great chap. can't wait til the next one.
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More... More... More......Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nadine21
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it, at first I was not really sure about the story but hey I do love it! I have questions though. First in the chapter where Harry finds out about Jerry he has an outburst of magic is that a sign that he is going to get his magic back? Is this story going to continue until Ash is working for the hunters at the bar if so is he going to die? Is Harry going to become a hunter and what will happen when Ash is done with school I mean he is older? Is Ash going to ask about the scars and the fact that Harry called himeself a freak? Have fun writing and thx for the swift updates!!!!
You recommended a author on your profile but I can't find her could you please
send me a link?
person Onikage
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was hot! TAKE THAT, JERRY THE LOSER! Now Harry's got a new man! WUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Ha ha for Jerry, bet he didn't know what hit him! but let's forget about him, please, he doesn't matter anymore. Can't wait to read, more. Is Ash going to meet Harry's friends?
person evanone
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Jerry's punishment in work made me laugh. Finally Harry will have someone who will love him. Good work.
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love Mikki fome that statment alone, it was so funny. I love Ash he is so awsome, and fun, and just fuckin amazing. Loveing whats happen to Jarry. I knew he was an ass from the moment he entered the story. I am so glad I read this story though I sterted not to because I don't watch TV like that so I've never really watch Supernutral. But I chose to read this sory anyway and I'm so glad I did. Can't wait for an update.
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that I can say that I agree that Jerry is a JERK! Look for to the next chapters to see the relationship with Ash develop into something very special.