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for Breaking Forwards

by lastcrazyhorn

person qwerty
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person Kayt
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am literally dying to know what happens next. i never read WIPs but i'm SO happy i decided to try yours. i'm not even going to worry about guessing what happens next. i'd rather just wait for you to update. i love everything about this story, except the hermione situation. i'm kind of wondering if she and harry will ever reconcile, since they are both victims and both deserve each other's friendships considering the people they relied on have failed them both. but either way, cant wait to see what happens!
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I read all that you have in one go! A great story...little disturbing in certain parts...but I just skip those. I really want to punch Ron in the face...what a *********************! sorry he seriously pisses me off. Please tell me someone is going to do something about him and he'll get his! Also I can't believe that nobody paid any attention to how Harry was treated over the years...how blind can they be? Ugh it makes me so mad! lol
Sorry about the rant I got really into this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
person Elphaba
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please make nev on harry's side!
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Make Harry punish Ron soon. UGH! And who's Rodney?
person Elphaba
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Snape is pissed!!!!
person Layla
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I am glad that Severus is willing to help Harry. It is shameful what Ron is doing. i do hope that things work out in the end. Please continue when you can.
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a very well-written story and I like it a lot. :) Personally, at times I find the story hard to read because of Ron and his manipulations. It brings the masochist out of me to continue reading the passages with him in it. I applaud you for causing emotions in the reader when, well, reading the story. Ugh, just thinking about Ron makes me shudder in disgust; I hope karma bites him back very hard.
person sanda
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Elphaba
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting story. I can't wait to see how it goes!