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for Breaking Forwards

by lastcrazyhorn

person Serenia
schedule December 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story. a little dark in places, but still a great story. and NO I dont mind the weasley bashing at all. Ron was never one of my favourite characters!!!!!
person staar
schedule January 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading this and I had to say that of all (many) the stories that I have read ...this one tops it all....Never have I read a topic like you did....this had it all !!!! loved it very much...Will bethinking of this one for a long time !!!!! loved that Harry got to have a dad to love and take care of him !!!!!!!!!
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I just discovered this and I am so glad that I did. It was sick and twisted in all the right ways. I've never like Ron as a character, but your portrayal was truly terrifying. This Ron didn't annoy me as a spoiled brat, he scared me. Bravo. The twisted Creevy brothers was also mind blowing. And my personal favorite, Minerva opening a magical can of whoopass on Albus. Thank you so much for writing this.
person dragonfhain
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was very, very difficult to read; it made my head hurt, it made my heart hurt and it made me cry more than a few times. I've been following this from when it was first posted to its conclusion and many times on the journey I did't want to continue. The helplessness and despair of the characters felt draining, it was dark and somber and pulled me down at times and gave a wonderful, hopeful ending. Thats what makes this story so amazing, the depth of emotion you have evoked from me, the reader. This may be JK's world, but you've done something brilliant with it and I hope you continue to write, either in fanfiction or in original fiction because you have an amazing voice to write with and are truly talented.
person dominique 1
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT WANT HARRY HAPPY AND LOVED
person mjd
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was an enjoyable story to read, I am a little sad to think that its over.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw that the end then? Well thanks for the great ride :) btw i wondered when i started reading this, at first i'd assumed it was the pairing but i guess not, what did you mean by HP&OP in the summary?
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is always more than amazing when a writer can capture the feelings that Harry should naturally have had if he were left in his situation.
The question would be how he would ever be on anyone but his own side. I don't understand why Ginny was not to contact Harry, but am sure you will tell us. Really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. p
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry! that is soooo overdue. I never could understand why he would stick with those who would not take care of him or even try to help him. A person can only take so much and I think that Harry has reached his limit. Also, I bet LV would not want to kill Harry if he knew that Harry would join him...I think I would consider it if I were him. p
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really awesome, though I skipped most of the Ron scenes