rate_review Reviews

Hi,
I seem to be a good story but the fact that I can see the 'text codes' (ex. from first chapter: Across the table, Harry

Ooh I love you ! You're the first male slash writer I found, do you know how hot that is !?
Hehe, I love how you put my 3 most favourite things to me, into one. :D
Yaoi, Naruto, and Itachi. -Add some Snarry to that, make it 4-
Although I will overlook the Het. D:
I am pansexual, but I just hate reading Het. XD Why read Het, when I can read yaoi ? I have enough of Het in real life. :o -Got off topic, sorry about that-
On to the review !
I love the plot(Never read this kind of story with this particular plot before.), and killing off Ginny, ^__^ You just didn't kill her fast enough yet. Hehe, I will most enjoy that when it happens. ;]
I'd love to read more, :]
Update soon, yeah ? :D

-Mickytachi

Naruto fan? lol Nice fanfic I hope to see more of it.

There is a few mistakes you have in this chapter. I will have the quote from the story just how it is typed then the correction.
"Eyes the color or the killing curse..." or should be of.
"The was never..." The should be They.
"...we have everything e nee." you forgot the 'w' and the 'd'.
"...her into he bitch she..." he should be she.
"...arm as the talked..." the should be they.
"erhem..." I have no idea what that is.
"...reached for hr wand." hr you forgot the 'e'.
"...just tyr..." that should be try.
Now that, that is done I love this story. I have always liked dark Harry. I agree with Harry on killing Ginny. Update soon I can't wait to see what happens.

A little confusing, but interesting, though the names are a little off putting as they are so clearly japanese. I wonder where the Harry/Snape slash comes in ^^ update soon