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for Love, Free as Air

by Lomonaaeren

person Anon
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you dried-up stick of evil. HAhahahahaha!

Mia
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! wonderful story so far..

i hope Harry will be able to solve the problem soon

please update soon
person k lave demo
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really? you come across as someone who tends to plan those things out. hmm... that's cool though. it seems draco's a much more assured focal point that the other two were. he has a clearer outlook on his situation and i think will manuever things to his advantage. would i be correct in guessing that severus may face the most change? as always the interactions between the characters are entrancing. they always pull me in. i look forward to more. til next time. ciao!
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a funny chapter- well at least the part where Harry destroyed that lab!( And I do love a Smart Harry!) The part about Draco and a manipulative Snape-not so much funny. LOL Poor Draco I hope he does use the info that Snape doesnt want him to leave to his advantage cuz Snape needs a huge kick in the pants. I wonder how their relationship will develop with all three of them. I am eager to find out. Thanks for the great fic!
person Lyrishark
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

I've been reading your stories for a while now and I finally had to say something.
I wanted to be an author for a long time as a kid, although eventually it turned out I am just too damned lazy.
Reading your stories gives me the same satisfaction that writing my own did. They are perfect - funny but still poignant, sexy and also thought-provoking. Your style is distinct enough to be recognizable, but your characterization and plots change enough to always be new and interesting.

Marry me plz :<
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your Severus reminds me so much of an ex boyfriend of mine. People like this really exist out there. I SO want to hug Draco, the poor thing. Very well written! Your shades of grey hit a nerve - its perfect how you wrote the near-leaving-scene. I think there are a lot of situations like this before there is an actual seperation in real life. Thank you for a story that subtle!
person k lave demo
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm inclined to think that u have an endless supply of ideas in your head. this looks to be very lengthy and promising. i like how with each threesome you chane the focal point. for the first harry, second severus and now draco. i wonder will he change faster than the other two or will he quickly fall back into old habits? i expect severus to meet a harder fall than he would like and harry had best be wary, no? please coninue writing this threesome there aren't enough good ones out there. til next time ciao!
person Darkless
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mega points for originality here! And to leave us dangling with Harry about to escape his cage and do some retalitory damage on Snape's lab is just too titilating. Please don't take too long with the next chapter. Woohoo! I just luv angst.
person inu-hottie
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN HIM!!!! Snape is a manipulative bastard!!! GAH!!!

I actually want to strangle the man. Does he realize what he's doing to Draco? I can see the breakdown chugging along as we speak, and it doesn't look pretty. As I said before, the man needs a swift kick to the pants. He doesn't seem to care about anyone or anything except brewing complicated potions, though Draco acting like a battered wife who just can't leave isn't helping.

It's sad when a parrot -granted the parrot is Harry Potter, but still- has more common sense than the two freaking lovers!

My one desire, not request because that would be rude, is that when the downfall finally comes Severus gets exactly what he deserves. I know it will come, becuase you are a wonderful author who actually has the ability to use reactions that would make sense it the real world, and it's doubtful you would allow such an abismal relationship into creation and not have plans to make Snape very sorry for his mistreatment of Draco.

He had better be sorry...He needs to be sorry...and not forgiven right away. (All my own opinion, of course.)
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was so sad... Poor Draco, I wonder if Snape even tells him...