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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitly getting more and more excited to see what will happen. The raid on Harry's house had me giggling like no tomorrow. Especially because of Kreacher. That was a nice touch. And the letter Severus wrote is definitly a start even if it is a small one. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I'm really curious to see what Severus has written to Harry and what he plans on doing to get Draco back and actually keep him and possibly change himself.
I like Ron and Hermione being closer to Harry than you usually write. It's a nice contrast to Chosen Chains lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job!! =)
I like Ron and Hermione being closer to Harry than you usually write. It's a nice contrast to Chosen Chains lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job!! =)
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
although this chapter was quite wordy in the sense that it has a lot of soliloquy, it's not too boring and rather easy to follow and read.
i appreciate good descriptive passages as much as good long dialogues, but they tend to lose me sometimes. so i'd say this chapter was a success in keeping it light and meaningful (not just keep babbling on)
mildly surprised at Severus' train of thought, perhaps slightly out of character for him, but approaching Harry seems quite logical too.
i appreciate good descriptive passages as much as good long dialogues, but they tend to lose me sometimes. so i'd say this chapter was a success in keeping it light and meaningful (not just keep babbling on)
mildly surprised at Severus' train of thought, perhaps slightly out of character for him, but approaching Harry seems quite logical too.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm hooked. simply cannot imagine how you will have the 3 men get together. so many possibilities. this makes me dearly wish they could be happy together.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you have going on here. I have been loving every new chapter that comes out. Keep up the good work, but may I say, I hope poor Snape gets something good out of all of this :(
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! i am happy for Draco hopefully we will be finally free soon
and i am wondering about the letter Severus is going to write to Harry what will it be?an apology?or something else?
please update soon
and i am wondering about the letter Severus is going to write to Harry what will it be?an apology?or something else?
please update soon
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Serves Snape right for penning a letter such as that. How cruel. I eagerly await reading how Draco will subtly seduce one Harry Potter. The hand in the hair was a good start. I hope more little touches and such will come along. I cant wait to see Harry fight for Draco during his trial and how Draco will react to that. And how nice and considerate Harry is to Draco. They should go out on a date! LOL. I know its too soon for that yet but I can dream. Loved it as always.
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOHOOOO!!! Draco kicked ass!!!
That letter was so great that I couldn't help laughing^^ Normally I like Severus, but here he is a right pain in the... backside. Serves him right to get a taste of his own medicine. He accused Draco of whining because he didn't get enough attention and yet he is doing the very same thing... The irony just kills me^^ I wondern when he recognises his own behaviour as the childish pouting it is...
That letter was so great that I couldn't help laughing^^ Normally I like Severus, but here he is a right pain in the... backside. Serves him right to get a taste of his own medicine. He accused Draco of whining because he didn't get enough attention and yet he is doing the very same thing... The irony just kills me^^ I wondern when he recognises his own behaviour as the childish pouting it is...
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
oh! i can't believe Draco wrote that, but im very proud of that... hmm. oh poor severus a stubborn snary man, when is he going to realize his loss?
please update soon
oh! i can't believe Draco wrote that, but im very proud of that... hmm. oh poor severus a stubborn snary man, when is he going to realize his loss?
please update soon
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There are some interesting twist in this story and I can't wait to see where it goes. And I like how good Ron and Hermione are being about Drado living with Harry. It's not something I thouht would happen right off. Fabulous job!! =)