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by Lomonaaeren

person Darkless
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the dance continues....

I'm back! And you've got some lovely new chapters for me (ok, not just for me, but I'm enjoying them like they are :P )

Oh my, Draco is only hiding, not dealing with anything. Harry is right (and it's been said many a time, even by myself to myself: I'm a libra, and if you know about them, 'nuff said) that even not making a decision is a dicision in and of itself. Procratinating only makes problems, questions and issues get larger, it doesn't make them go away or solve themselves.

Luckily, it's only the small decisions I have problems with. As long as you have certain morals and convictions in your life, the big descisions are easy. Draco apparently doesn't know what he wants, hence the choices seem daunting enough that he either wants them to disappear or he just wants someone else to make the 'decisions' for him. But life doesn't work that way. Things left to themselves often spoil: the pot on the stove, the fruit on the tree, things left unsaid, and relationships un-nurtured. He's all too willing to fall back into habitual patterns, which is disappointing when he had started to question what he wanted while still at Grimmauld Place. His head & heart are not in the same place, so he's confused.

Some people have to learn things the hard way, unfortunate but true. And some of those stubborn people need harsher lessons than most. I wonder how hard a lesson Draco will need to snap him out of his safe little bubble? What pin will burst him into reality?

Ah, I love a good long story that makes the old gray matter jump up and dance. I'm avid for more! I'll be waiting.
person Oscillum
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought your most recent chapter was quite refreshing, and I enjoyed it immensely, particularly Harry's conversation with Severus at the end. It just shows all three of them need each other in their own ways. Though, I'm sure they still have quite a bit to learn. I would say you have nothing to worry about as far as convicing goes, to comment on your response to my previous review. You do a suberb job of bringing them together in a way that's both satisfying and believable.

Happily awaiting to read more! Kudos to you so far.
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes I still think that lol. Because just like Draco, Severus needs a kick in the ass as well. I'm also really excited to see how well the case goes for Narcissa and what will happen to Severus if he allows Harry to talk and let Hermione take over his case. Great job!! =)
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry finally lost his temper with Draco. He needs a good kick in the ass to get him moving along the right path. And the Harry/Severus situation is coming along nicely lol. Great job, can't wait for more!!!! =)
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Draco has been oh-so-inviting! Tch, how can he even hope to get Harry to be all over him with affection when he throws Harry away like he is a nuisance? Draco desperately needs a nice kick in the butt. To be hit in the face hard enough to scratch his pretty face. Perhaps HE should be the one doing the courting of Harry next when he notices how he and Severus have grown close. HA!

Can you tell Draco's behavior is getting on my nerves?
person Oscillum
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've absolutely adored every story of yours that I've read (which is quite a few of them), and this story is no exception. I think that the Harry/Draco/Severus stories have been my favorites. I think the three of them are such a wonderful threesome. You certainly make all three of them so complex and believable which is what I appreciate, because I can really connect with them. You're a marvelous story-teller, and I just hope some day I can write with the same talent and passion you do.

Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter!
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your slow progression of their relationship. Well written.
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting so excited to see what happens with Harry and Severus. Not to mention the mix with Draco. I want more I tell you. MORE!!!! Great job lol!!!! =)
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Draco making choices, Severus changing, and Harry finally starting to figure out what he wants. I'm so excited to see where this goes!!!! Great job!!!! =)
person Wishstar
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Blue: So cute...
and it made sence how it played out. The only other threesome I read with this pairing had it too rushed into the pairing that it didn't make sence.
Falcon: You're a great author, keeping the characters in character in any situation you write, thinking of how they'd react to each other. I bow to your expertise.