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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 please!!!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this fic has a lot of potential...but you might think about finding a beta reader. I would offer my services but I really have a lot going on right now with school and work. Despite the bumpy start I'm looking forward to seeing more of this fic.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Including the title and not including the lack of capitalisation, there are 18 words and six mistakes in your summary. That's one word in three wrong before even opening the fic.
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this and would love to see how it develops...as far as your english you just need a beta to help..but great job