rate_review Reviews

Well just relize I didn't reveiw this story when I read it so I'm doing it now. Better lat then never. I cought this story at the last chapter so got a few thing to say. Frist I have always fond Harmoine annoying so to read a story that keeps her the pretty much the same and still show how much of a pain she is it refreashing. It might be just me but I want Ginny and Melinda to have painful deaths. Like I said just what I say. Oh that thing with Sirius made me want to slap him into next month. Glad Draco and the twins are ok, feel sorry for his mom though. Luna is awsome. Just had to throgh that in there. Ron's an ass. Now that's all I can think of. Up date soon. It's a really good story.

Ok, I definitly love this story!!!

The storyline is creative, there are suprising turns in it, good side lines, just perfect!!!
The only thing I am not content with is you spelling... you should get a beta to check you verb times and your use of "and", it often appears double.

I like the idea of the dementors... I always had the question in mind where they came from, and your explanation is great.
I also like that Harry is not too forgiving with Sirius and Remus. He is the King of Darkness, he cannot go all fluffy on them. Great!
And the scene with the demon beheading was also great, he had to make an impression to get them to listen! I wouldn't have belived it if they had followed him without him showing strength.

I am looking forward to Wyatt bringing his subordinates to order... he cannot just behead a buch of people... he is the Light King... he has to be just and fair and all that.... will be interesting how you will let him manage that.

And the fight with the last Dark King and Melinda at the same time will be one major chapter. I am holding my breath so don't keep me waiting too long!!! ;-)

Bye Sanchan

I read all of your stories and hav only one thing to say...MORE. I hope you update soon, and not only 'Shadows'.

so need more!!!!!!!!!!!!

just love this story