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by TheDarkLadyVoldemort666

schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can see harry protecting Draco and the others, even Salzar and his mates. and why does he have to give up his griphon side? can't he join it with the other sides of houses that he possess. The hard working puff, cunning snake, smart Raven, brave Griphon. I love this story but I'm starting to resent how Harry is always in the wrong.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far, I hope you continue it soon.
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me crazy...er. I swer I get to excited over it.
Some times I want to skip parts just to get to read what I what to know but I get so worried that I'll mix something wich ends up being true. Then as soon as I start a chapter I'll want to read the next chapter. And the fact that yourr chapters are so long mack me adore the story and you write really well.
This story is just all around awsome.
The acule story keeps me into it and ecited.I feel my heart raceing most times trying to figer out whats going to happen next. This sory is great so update soon.
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chap before this one, but I really didn't like this one at all... The language threw me off. It is weird for me that you make the dark side the good side but at the same time let Harry call Hermione a mudblood several times. I just can't see a good Harry being a racist at all, even if Hermione is very dark in this story. It is one thing to know that there is a difference in blood, but another to still think one is better... I hope the language and bashing of the trio is not gonna be the focus of the next chapters.
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story. i hope harry dosn't do anythimg stupid. can't wait to see the prank. updat soon.
person Chocho
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hm. well. they say harry isn't ready to be told but it seems to me that the longer they go without telling harry, the more jealous and possessive he becomes of lucius. so in the end they're hurting him and condemning him instead of helping him, which is pretty much the same thing dumbledore used to do. keeping things from him because he wasn't ready, he wasn't old enough. trying to protect him "for his own good" will only turn out disastorous in the end. it always does.
person Chocho
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love how the manipulative dumbledore aspect works in this story. great story, but most of this chapter is one giant paragraph. makes it hard to read.
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it there? I need more i tell you, more. At first I was kinda meh, read it before. But the more I read the more I liked it. It's not like the other fics with tom and malfoy as mates. Good job.
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I HOPE THE HOUSE IS NICE AND YOU GET WHAT YOU NEED FOR IT.

THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AH!!! This is such a good story! I know how real life can be, but please update as soon as you can! I REALLY need to see what will happen with Harry and coming to terms with who his White Wolf and Silver Snake are! And, of course, what happens after he gets over whatever snit he'll most likely go into. hehehe