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Good chapter

I think it cruel the way they reacted to Harry, cause he didn't mean anything by it, his requests weren't that demanding!

I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope Harry learns to hide himself qike. And the other pranks can't wait for them.

I absolutely love this story so far :)
Good job to the both of you!

oh my god that chapter was good it make me cry. was feeling harry pain. i can not wait for more of the story and see if harry make them pour of him . up date .

love it and I hope they take Harry

nice chapter. i can't help but get the feeling that when Harry said he wanted to be equal, he wasn't talking about the same thing as Lucius. He doesn't want marked, he doesn't want to kill, and it sounds like he really doesn't want to be involved with the war from the front lines. It seems that Lucius misunderstood him a little when he was talking about how he worked his way up through the ranks. I have the feeling that Harry is talking about something far more personal than either one of them believed and he was not expressing himself well. It seems to me that someone forgot to explain to him what a submissive is and that it doesn't mean he will be 'walked over' by the other two and ignored except for a list of chores and bottoming in the bed.

holy crap harsh!
if i was harry i would have just let them walk out or else walk out myself, even if that meant me withering away to nothingness.
bastards.
tom and lucius were both way too harsh with harry. they just don't seem to get it. harry has been made to believe that tom and the death eaters were the bad guys for the entirety of his young, short life. albus was the good guy. his psuedo-grandfather. the one person he could turn to. one of the only people he could trust. of course that isn't going to change over night. it doesn't work like that. and yes, he IS still a child. you can't expect him to think and act and behave as an adult, like tom and lucius, when he's only 15 years old (or whatever he is). they need to give him some leeway and have a little bit more patience. and maybe realize that they aren't the only ones who've had shit done to them. if they can't then maybe they don't deserve to have harry as their mate.

I love this story but are they being fair, all of them? I can understand the point of Harry having to work to become an equal, but he didn't say they could defend them selves against his family if they attacked. How can they just expect him to put everything he witness and learned? yes he did have a awake up call but that would just enforce that he would want to bacome someone elses pawn.

Hey if Salizar leaves who will help train Harry? Why can't Harry have anyone help him heal? Talk to? ask questions? guide him yes he is almost an adult but he never had anyone there for him. With everything he has been through, alone to. I cant blame him some childish fits. Tom had Salzar. Draco had Tom and Lucius. Lucius had his parrents. A person alone is more vulalble to the world and them selves.