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please please please keep writing! it's been a while since your last update and i hope you didn't abandon the story! i want more of the three of them! hurry up!

Hi, I love this story! Please please please please please never give up on it! It's so original and it makes you really think about the actual books and Dumbledore because the way you write it makes it seem very plausible!
Hope you see another chapter soon! :) It will make my week!
Thank you!

Beth

I forgot to say a few things! ;)
1. Ignore the reviewer above me! I like chapter 15. I think it's necessary to show that it's not gonna be plain sailing for the 3 mates. It was very well written!
2. Kudos to you for managing to get past the obstacle of being blind and writing an amazing story!
3. I don't mind at all how long I'll wait for a chapter, I'll always be here!
thanks for writing one of the best stories on here :)
Beth

so i really liked this story before, and i had thought that the only problem was that it was taking way to long for Harry to see Tom. Now...no offense but this chapter sort of made it all seem really stupid. Not only did Tom and Lucius' reactions make no sense, they kept talking about him acting like a child...which he wasn't at all. It was supposed to be a mutual want, but suddenly it was if they didn't want harry at all. I feel like, as he is supposed to be their submissive, they shouldn't be telling him that they can't always be there for him, but instead say that they will protect him until the end. He was supposed to be apart of them, and suddenly they say he doesn't deserve to be treated with the same esteem. It just didn't make sense at all, and made me upset cause it's not supposed to be like that. I feel like as their submissive he should be allowed to act childish, or however he wants and it's their job to love him. This chapter made it seem like everything fell apart for no apparent reason.

Okay so my first order of business on this site is to find you my friend and read this story here. Must say it is still excellent.

AHHHH!!! It's getting soooooooo good!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

OH more please! lol ;-)

I thought Voldie did tell Quirrel to kill the boy

Good start of story!

Good chapter!!