rate_review Reviews

I've been following along so far and am enjoying this story. I was wondering why you are using Apep instead of Set, before I realized (and researched) that Set was frequently opposed by Horus and Ra, Apep. I also think it has something to do with the whole evil-snakes thing (it makes me wonder at a possible connection between Moldyshorts and Apep).

Ohhh these newest chapters are interesting!!! I guess this answers my question about if there will be an evil for him to fight. I've never come across this idea before of Ra and I am really looking forward to reading more. I wonder if Harry inherited it or if it manifested some other way. I am on the edge of my seat! This story is beautifully written and captivating and I can't get enough. Wow! I just love how Harry thinks of Draco. can I say yummm ;)Ah there are just so many things to keep me occupied in this story a lil action a lil romance some mystery. My likey Powerful!Harry lol. Now what is he going to do without a wand? wandless magic or something totally different? hmmmmm. Keep up the fantastic work! You updated pretty quickly and I was pleasantly surprised and about jumped for joy. Update as soon as you can, I eagerly await your next work of art. Thanks for thinking up this awesome story.

well then might i congratulate youon a marvelous first attempt at fanfic. Yea once we got a little farther into the fic I saw its uniqueness...Plaintains really? those are those funny banana things right? I will keep that in mind....This might be a bit premature but I think this might be my new favorite fic. anxiously awaiting more!!

I am loving this so far! And I love your personal sayings like "yawned his jaws" and such, keep them up! Thanks for the update!

Good. A few grammatical snags to fix.

"Apep yawned his jaws" you mean "stretched his jaws." The other way makes no sense.

"until his body was full to overflowing with the life force of the unwilling" you mean "until his body was full to the point of overflowing with the life force of the unwilling"

Otherwise,good chap. You remind me that I need to update soon! LOL.

well...you must tell me what you feed your plot bunnies that they give you such complex plot lines. this is looking really really super fantastic so far and I cannot wait for your next update.

holy flannel shirts batman!!! that was a crazy start!...The title and first few paragraphs feel slightly familiar have you posted this somewhere else before? regardless that was an awesome start and I can't wait to see more.

Wow. This is good. Please update, I'd like to read more.

Awesome!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh Man I wish you weren't a Grad student and super busy because this is one of the BEST fanfictions I've read to date! You certainly know how to capivate an audience, and with your first chapter! Shoot your first sentence about sums it up! LOL. I love how Harry is borderline obsessed with Draco, and the whole push him over any avaiable surface, yummy! It seems your fic has everything a lil romance-even Ron and Hermione are cute. A lil inheritance action-I loooove Powerful!Harry especially with wings. I wonder if this story will be mostly about Harry accepting his inheritance or if there will be evil that needs to be defeated or something along those lines. Either way I look forward to reading this awesome fic. Especially since you left us hanging with that cliffy! How's Draco going to react to what Harry did? I hope he'll be intrigued and attracted to Harry'd amazing power ;) And it seems like you'll make Harry more Dominant or boy do I hope so because there aren't that many fics with him like that and I savor any ones that I can find. Also will this be MPreg? Anyway I think I've written enough, no need to sit around reading my review when you have chapters to write! LOL May the muse be with you so you can crank out another chapter or 20 and all with your super busy schedule. Thanks for writing this awesome fic and I look forward to reading more of your work as I hope this will not be the only fic that you upload because I think you'll be another author that I can't get enough stories from. Keep up the great work both here and in school so you can write even more! hehe. Eagerly awaiting your next masterpiece chapter. :)