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I really like this story so far and I really want more, hmm don't think Severus will be too happy about Hermione self harming :( I like how you have brought Rabastan into the mix and you have brought all the other characters out really well, with some good humour in there :) keep up the good work!

Well, now we know why Minerva is having problems: She is acting like a manipulative bint! Sad thing is that apparently she hasn't realized that is what is turning everyone against her. Minerva seems a little OoC in this story. Severus? About what I'd expect. Lupin? Again, OoC...... he was a wimp with James and Sirius so I really don't get how he grew a pair so fast. Hermione? Kinda OoC in the latest chapter, but then again, I can understand her self hurting.

I just noticed you updated and I missed it! Eek! But, joy! I get to read 2 in a row! :-) I am so sorry they had to go through with all that. Part of me is angry at Harry for going through with it, but the other part understands his position and is glad he at least won't tell about what he saw. For the first time in any story, and I've been reading fics for several years, you've done something no one else has done. You've made me so angry with Minerva that I am close to hating her. What she did and said and how she acted with Severus were unconscionable! She was such a beyotch! I get that you need to make sure he's on your side, and I get that he hasn't been the nicest of people or the most welcoming individual, but to abuse him like that, physically, mentally, emotionally, and finally verbally?! I am appalled at her and don't know if any of it can be forgiven. I just hope Hermione remembers it and puts Minerva in her place when she can function, talk and is back to herself. No one who's done all he has and who's suffered as much as he's suffered, deserves that. Even Harry, who hates him, had more compassion! And, as if they haven't suffered enough, Rabastan is now waiting for them? Good lord! Okay, I need to go read the next one and I am hoping it ends better than this one for them. Sigh... will they ever not be hurt?

HG4eva

Well, no, I guess not. Sigh... Only pain and misery for them, huh? And, now Rabastan to watch out for, too? I'm actually scared of the rest of The Order now. I fear them going to The Burrow almost as much as them staying at the castle. So, is Harry a bad guy now, too? I am so sad for them; misery behind them and ahead of them. Merlin, I hope you're a happy ending type writer! Okay, now I have to go find a happy easy story. This one is great and intriguing and I wouldn't suggest changing a thing, but it's not a good bed time read. lol Thank you and please update again soon. HG4eva

Thank you for moving the story where I could more easily find it. I sincerely hope many others find and enjoy it as much I do. You deserve so many more reviews than you have right now! Their first time was sweet, even if it wasn't in the perfect setting or with wonderful results. I hope Severus breaks down and tells the truth of his doings, if for no other reason than his desire to see Hermione freed from suspicion. I am sorry he feels so badly about himself, but I am hoping the return of her memory and voice will help Hermione get him to see things more positively with her by his side. I wonder about Harry and his reaction to everything... Oh! What did she write with the oj on the letter? lol Thank you. I look forward to the next update! HG4eva

I am glad that Hermione is remembering feelings for Severus even if she doesn't remember details. I really, really hope that she figures things out real quick and lets Minerva and Harry have it when they try to break into his mind. I don't know how Minerva thinks Harry is going to legilimize Severus unless he binds him to the bed and that would probably not be wise. I could see Hermione having a flashback of the Manor and going off on Minerva and Harry. That is the who's memories they need to see, maybe this will trigger them. Wonder what Harry would think about the Dr forcing Hermione to 'service' him. Why are Gryffindor's so BLIND??? Looking forward to the next update!

I am really enjoying your story!! I have always been a fan of Severus and Hermione pairings! ^_^ I'm excited for the next chapter!!

Hello. I just sat and read the entire story to this point. I found it by mistake when I had to search for a story on a new machine. This is really good, moving and touching, even if everything is painful and horrible right now for them. I look forward to your next update. :-) If I might make a suggestion to get you more readers? Change the location from Harry Potter AU --> Male/Female to the main Male/Female--> Hermione Severus page. I know people who only go to the same pages over and over (like me until now lol) would LOVE this story!! Good luck and please update again soon. Thank you, HG4eva

Well, it sure is getting hot in the dungeon...Lupin is downright ugly and McGonagall is not much better. I can't believe that they are even doubting Hermione's loyalty. I hope she gets her memory back quick, I have a feeling Severus is going to need her. I am interested in seeing how things develop for sure.

The last two chapters were amazing!