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she went to Rabastan !! i think Hermione added a new meaning to word "bitch".
did she become mentally unstable?


i like Harry's decision.

will Severus magic return because he had found pupose and someone to love in most pure way (as a family) (father and son) and that love be reciprocated (for first time of his life).

What is going on? Why is Serverus acting like this? I know he can be abrasive at times and self-doubting, but this seems like over the top. Although she does deserve it. I hope this doesn't push her towards Ratbatan, although I am still not sure I want her with Serverus, she doesn't deserve to be happy with anyone else! Is someone or something controlling them? I also hope Serverus and the order take good care of Teddy! Keep the chapter coming!

Hey, I just started this story yesterday and have been getting nothing productive done in real life! I have been glued to the screen and utterly ensnared! (completely captivated in the nicest way :) I really love all the unique ideas you are coming up with and all the political plots and intrigue, not to mention new takes on the character's histories and motivations-- Can't wait for more!

Hi there. I'm back from vacation and get to read all of your updates now. Yay! I hoe Hermione's life is easier at the Burrow than I suspect it will be. And, I, for the first time ever, want to punch Minerva in the face for her callousness. Way to kick a man when he's down. Sheesh! Off to read the next one. :-) Thanks, HG4eva

Hi again. I am so glad her homecoming was nice and warm, even if Severus' wasn't. It's sad to see that he can't find any happiness and is willing to throw what little life gives him away. And, I am so sorry to know Harry and Ron had a falling out and that Ron hadn't been back. I guess the trio is over for good. Sigh... But, yay for Ginny being alive and well and back in Hermione's life. She needs a friend. Why does that last sentence scare me? lol Off to read the next one... HG4eva

Hermione and Rabastan?! No, no and NO!! The thought gives me the shivers. And, good for her for not allowing him to contintue to wallow in his own failure and misery. I just with she would get the help she needs so that she can stop hurting herself. I hate that life and Minerva have brought Severus so low. :-(

But, wait! Does that mean he got his magic back in time to save Teddy?! Fingers crossed and REALLy glad I don't have to wait for my answer. :-) Off to read the next update. Thanks again, HG4eva

Well... well... I'm honestly not sure what to think right now. I know Severus didn't take or hurt Teddy. I know Remus is not Remus. I know I'm still angry with Minerva. And, I know neither Hermione, nor Severus deserve all this awfulness. You say there's more pain and upset to come? Sigh... Okay, I will still be here. Thanks for a moving update! HG4eva

I got to say...I am still loving this story, but the more I read the less I am liking Minerva and even remus! Update soon!

Hey there. I finally got to get caught up on this story. I am so sorry her pain and confusion are so great and her self-esteem so low that she feels hurting herself if her only option. I am also sad that she is so genuinely happy to be going to the Weasleys. I don't like knowing how miserably unhappy Severus is either, but at least he holds no such allusions that their life is going to get better. Watching her crushed again is going to hurt. But, I think I am ready. Thank you for allowing them a glimmer of happiness for a moment with each other. I don't think they're going to get a lot more chances to be together any time soon. You write this really well, but at the end of each chapter I feel like I should give you a hug. lol Thank you once again, HG4eva

They can't be seperated!!!!