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this chapter is sick, i hate this kind of behavior unless she was drugged.

i loved the story before, but now ....... unless it gives reasonable explanation in the next few chapters, i think i wont read it anymore.

anther sick chapter.

the third will be the charm.
i really hate when great story becomes a depraved one, lets hope that was the last of this behavior.

I don't know if I will be able to read this anymore either. It's a great story, but I like SS/HG as a couple, and I don't think I could root for them anymore, since I think Severus deserves better, and should dump her lying, cheating, whoring ass! Hermione is so selfish in this! Poor Severus! First Rabastan takes his job, his spying, and now the woman he loves! Part of me hopes he does find out what she did, and casts her out of his life, and finds a real woman! The other part which loves Hermione and Severus together, still wants them to be together. Not as a threesome with Ratbaston (mispelling deliberate!), but as the loving couple they were before these evil people intruded. Severus is being incredibly brave and selfless, and Hermione is being cowardly and selfish! She is the one who is not worthy of Severus, and it would take alot of groveling for me to be okay with them getting back together! As for the other stuff, Remus's breakdown was surprising,but it seems like everyone is giving into their darksides. Is it something in the air? Part of Malfoy's master plan? The weird stuff going on in the ministry has me intrigued, but I am still wondering if I want to continue. Angst is stressful, and I have enough stress in my life! If I don't finish reading, I may still pop in after it's done and see how it all ends. I don't know. Despite my reservations, you have a great story here! Keep up the good work!

well..... this will be a graphic story filled with depravity, any reader reached this chapter will have to accept that.

the strange thing is: i still want to read the story, i never before encountered any story like this, i mean this story is both disgusting yet stimulating, it is like being the thing and its own opposite in the same breath.

thats some ability.

i think that Hermione is a bitch in heat letting any dog to mount her because she simply happened to see it (the dog).

i cease to think that this story is SS/HG anymore, personally i hate to see them back together, i mean.... Severus insulted and eventually lost Lily because she was flirting with Potter and making out Remus, then what should be his reaction when he knows that Hermion is having sex with the man who stole everything from him and that man is D.E and rapist in the same time,

so i am indifferent to Hermione and whatever fate that awaits her.

to make things short the only good characters (IMHO) are Severus, Remus, miss Longbottom and Draco.

sorry for the long review.

I agree with what Toto said, by the way, what does IMHO mean? As you can tell, I am not up on all the internet lingo! LOL! I guess I am in til the bitter end. Especially since everytime I check, I see a new chapter! Please keep the chapters coming, don't draw out the angst please! As far as Hermione, I hope she gets her just desserts! I can't wait to read Harry's reaction when he hears who Hermione is whoring with! Sorry to sound so judgemental, but that is what she is doing! She also seems to be hurting both men, and although Rabastan deserves it, I fear he will harm Severus in some way! I also agree with Toto that Remus, Ava, Severus, and Draco are the only decent characters here! I am not saying Harry, because I am mad about what he said about Severus, and his encouragement of Hermione's activities. I also think Hermione loss the right to be angry on Snape's behalf, since she is the one who is going to hurt him the most!

I apologize to Tito. I just went back and reread the reviews, and realized I was spelling her user name wrong! Sorry!

the chapter's name is :honor defended.
i fail to see honor in Harry since he gave Hermione his blessing earlier, i fail to see honor in Hermione , her last thought was she may WANT to have sex Rabastan even if Severus returned.

the scandal is the most realistic result, i mean did she take any contraceptive yet ? i didnt take note of any thing relating to protection in their relationship.

Rabastan is declaring what he wants in front of the order is so daring and disgusting (a real characteristic of him), he doesnt care that he knows nothing about the body which he use to his pleasure.

Hermione deserves what happened.

i hope this will be the waking up moment for her.

i am interested in Molly's reaction to what happens under her roof.

if the end of Rabastan affair with hermione is near, please post it all in this ultra super speed, swallowing the whole bitter potion in one go is better than drawing it long.

thanks for this record destroying fast updates.

@ Grace:
IMHO stands for in my humble opinion (i dont know if it should be in capital).
thanks
btw i am a he. lol.

@Tito, sorry for the mixup! I should know better than to assume a person's sex in the world of fan-fiction!
Now, where the hell is that @#$%^! I am definetly going to have to go to confession after this story is done! By the way, is it all written and almost complete? By the way, Harry is off my bad list now due to this chapter! Hermione I fear will never be off it! I know I shouldn't judge, but she lets this man use her, and then she not only betrays Serverus in the bed he made love to her in, but she got over her fear of bj's with that Ratbastan, not Severus, who imho deserves it more! Add to that, that she is unwilling to stay away from him even if it hurts the man she claims to "love" She knows nothing of the word!

I am still reading as I think the storyline itself is excellent. I DO read lots of Dark stories and while some of the things here have been harsh, I understood that from the start. My main problem is that I started reading this, after all the warnings, because it was SS/HG. I do not see how you could ever reconcile what Hermione has done with a relationship between her and Severus. If there had been even a tiny inkling that she was being forced or tricked I would feel different, but what she is doing has no excuse. I agree with Tito, I am interested in seeing what molly will say and please lets ditch Rabastan soon. And Grace, I agree with your assessment of Hermione. She ought to be getting a paycheck from Rabastan. I have read many characterizations of Hermione most of them OOC, but I don't like this version at all.
Poor Severus, now maybe everyone will treat him decently. Well, I sit back to wait on the next update...I don't know if it was your intention, remarkable, but I am loving to hate this story!!

fast updates means fast reviews (i think).

did Hermione commit suicide OR did She leave the house or just hiding.
does her headpiece (that thing which enable her to speak) work on muggles or she is mute to them.

finally Severus is back.

i hope Draco had escaped.