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i meant in previous review : "it is good that only Teddy is with Hermione"
sorry for the incomplete sentence.

Yep, that was nasty.

I'm a little concerned with all that Severus has seen. If he saw the oral sex Hermione gave Rabastan, he might be pissed off. I know I would. The idea that she could get over her trauma for someone that she doesn't love and not for Severus, whom she does...urg. Are you going to blame it on the curse?

Well, you did it again. You created a chapter that was not only well written, but full of emotion. I like this Severus. He has regained his strength of heart and also some forgiveness. Usually, I would consider legillimancy to be an invasion of privacy the way it was done, but the things between the two would have only festered and gotten worse. So I take it that Hermione changed her mind about men since the snake is gone? The scenes with Teddy should continue to be fun! I look forward to more story!

That went better than I thought it would.I am glad he found out though, so now there are no secrets again. Hermione knows now what Severus intentions are, and she knows not to cheat again if she doesn't want to lose Severus! Serverus seems to be maturing, because he reacted alot better than I thought he would, Hell, he reacted better than I would. I just hope he doesn't dwell on what he saw. Looking forward to the next one!

how could Minnerva force/accept/agree with Severus' oath to "love and protect Hermione no matter what."

she knows that he doesnt know about the affair, then he is forced to forgive even if he doesnt want to. (may be that was her intent.... to force him forgive so he and Hermione would know peace and love. may be Minnerva learned from Albus after all.)

but what if Hermione cease to love Severus .... or may she would to separate in the future, the oath would be a curse in that instant.

i think that getting an oath from one side while letting the other (who actually cheated) is an act of hypocrisy.

i would have considered the oath romantic if he had made it after knowing the truth. specially if both of them take the same oath.

anyway, that can be corrected when both sides take the marriage vows.

great chapter as always.

Wow, I haven't been able to read this story in forever! I am really glad I got to get caught up tonight, but even more that I didn't have to wait for more story as I read all of that. Merlin, there's so much... I hate that she slept with Rabastan and enjoyed it so much, despite her heartache over it. I don't know how Severus found it in himself to try and forgive her for it, but for the sake of the story I am glad he did. It was so nice to have two chapters that were almost happy at the end of all of that stress. I want Lucius to live a nice long, painful, horrifying, never-ending agony of a life and soon! And, I hope Teddy doesn't get hurt anymore as they struggle to beat back the dark. Thank you once again! HG4eva

Very nice chapter...I am glad that Severus has been given his purpose back - and his magic. Is he going to let anyone know other than Hermione? He seems to be well on his way to being healed both body and soul. I hope Hermione doesn't ruin everything by keeping her secrets. If her liaison with Rabastan comes out in the heat of the moment, I don't know if he will forgive her. She needs to come clean before they get intimate again. I am loving Teddy - you have a solid character in him. Well done.
The writing in this chapter is why I have stuck with the story. I know you and your muse have your way of telling this story, but I just wanted you to know that even without the shock value, I would read it for the chapters you have written so very well!!!

very very satisfying chapter.
great one.

is Teddy an incarnation of previous hero !!
no wonder Malfoy will do anything to capture him.

Fizzy Lifting potion? I guess there's a little "Willy Wonka" in us all, eh?

The Brit-ism I believe is "balls to it". I cheated a little and googled. Mainly found in reference to a show called "Two Pints of Lager and a Packet of Crisps". Somehow I doubt that this is it. Let us know.