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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sorry i am to sick to leave a longer comment but i had to say that i love it so far and can't wait to see where you take it from here...great job for your frist story.
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait to see more!
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hum...would Draco ask for help? Even from Slughorn (as I know Snape is dead)? Or will he visit Madam Pomfrey so he could stay nearer to Harry? BTW, what is the young man looking for?
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are your updates random? I try to check everyday, but I didn't catch this last one and now I'm disoriented about the days, so I was just curious if you updated every day or whenever. Is Draco turning into a half Dragon or something. xD It would be cool if he just had the wings and a hint of scales. ^.^ Ahh and I do hope that man is Snape but it's looking more like he's a bad guy, so maybe not. Thanks for the read.
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh dear...scaly draco...this could be interesting. Cant wait for more!
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's Snape. The person is like Snape.
It's hard to get past your writing tense, but I'm trying because the actual story is somewhat interesting. >.> Anyway I'm here lurking, just to let you know someone is around.
It's hard to get past your writing tense, but I'm trying because the actual story is somewhat interesting. >.> Anyway I'm here lurking, just to let you know someone is around.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was really good,,,i can't wait 4 more...thanxz 4 sharing..oh one question is harry some magical creature like an elf or fea or something new and they just haven't figured it out and its triggered by draco's visits? just wondering.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting. Have you considered writing in past tense and not present tense? It's just odd to read it in present tense. Keep up the good work.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i find your story really rather interesting and very detailed & descriptive...i can't wait to see were you lead us from here....good job
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my...what a begining! I would love to see more. That was really good. very effective for getting someone interested. Keep up the great work *gives chocolate sundae* Sundaes always help me write. It might help you.