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for Troubled Blessing

by Ravne131

person whitebuffalowmn
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story! I'd like to read more of it, if you ever decide to update. thank you for writing it.
person suezq
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to read the next chapter loved every min. of what you have posted sofar
please email the next chapter at suezq21643@gmail.com
person D.Star
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sending this to let you know that the codeing or the wording in your story has been messed up there are these " ? " simboles all through your story
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you might want to have a look at the fic, there is and upside down question mark followed by numbers after a sentence or so. it might need to be re-uploaded.
person Jan
schedule September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see whats going to happen, hope Harry is able to prove Snape wrong. Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^
person heartstar
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this I hope to see more when you can thank you.
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice concept so far. I think you have made it very believable, making male-pregnancy so very rare that Harry was startled over the fact as well as Severus and Severus is just an idiot - again, like so often
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another nice chapter, Ravne, it was a good idea to go back and show how it had come to that, not that we wouldn't know about how one could get pregnant :D ... thanks for another great chapter
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
dunno who of the three is more an idiot, Harry for not informing Severus, Draco for not informing Severus or Severus for jumping to concolusions
though I have to admit, upset as Harry was, of course he hadn't thought about it, and though I have to admit - if I found my partner in bed with someone else - I'd kill both of them :D ...
so, the blame entirely lays with Draco of course - I do hope that they soon come to senses and the situation will be cleared
thanks for writing another enjoyable chapter
schedule June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
le sigh... heaven forbid that they should actually... i don't know... TALK to each other. >> I spotted a couple of typos. Keep an eye on that, yeah.