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by penny1200

schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
From this Draco will learn for good about muggles......... funny funny funny
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hermione and Draco are too funny .........
person Jillian
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I like your story so far and can't wait to see Draco become a half-decent human being. i get a giggle thinking of Hermione and Ron trying to get it on and Draco calling non-stop because he knows they're trying to get it on and he wants to piss them off, or him calling/texting Ron non-stop to piss him off. A cellphone would be a dangerous thing in Malfoy's hands, just think of all the candid pics he could snap and then text around!

Thanks for sharing,
Jillian
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes I really do love to see Luna and Harry together. My husband is not even a big fan of Harry potter but from seeing the movies he commented that Harry should end up with the "spacy blonde" as he calls Luna. I Can't wait to find out what Draco did to change his flat that would make Hermione upset.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. It's a very refreshing take on reforming Draco's take on Muggles. I also like that Harry is married to Luna rather than Ginny. I like Ginny, but I always thought Luna would make a more interesting wife for him. I can't wait for the fireworks (good and bad) to start between Draco and Hermionne ^_^
person Leria
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I don't think that Malfoy is 'misguided' in his beliefs. Considering that if the muggles found out about wizards, they would probably try to dissect them or worse? I think his beliefs are VERY sane.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This have fireworks written all over it........ With these two tempers you have a lot to come up with....... So keep them coming this is going to be a very intresting ride.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I will tell you what I think... I think this idea is great and rather original, the writing it terrific, and the plot intriguing. I look forward to more really soon and am glad you chose to share this story. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nice start...I like how you've really worked on the characterizations and the plot and backstory....a smart fic. I likey.